Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Falling asleep as my character

I had a really good day today. My family got along really well, we always do anyway. I love being close to them. I wish I was closer to my friends though. I don't have many of those. Maybe tomorrow at school I'll talk to someone. Try to make some friends. Ugh no they wont like me anyways. Maybe another day. ] I should get some sleep. Oh gosh what if I go to school and the one friend I have doesn't talk to me? I gotta sleep. School tomorrow. Im.. so scared.
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  1. AmandaTSeptember 25, 2013 at 2:48 PM

    Dear Katie,
    I enjoyed how I could feel the pressure and anxiety that your character had. I would suggest to add more details about why your character is lonely, so the reader can explore the mind of the character. Does your character have some kind of strange trait?

    Good Luck Blogging,
    Amanda

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  2. BrookeSeptember 25, 2013 at 3:36 PM

    Hey Katie,

    I really like how short and concise you sentences are. It truly shows how confused and cluttered you characters mind is. Are you enjoying the writing process so far? I look forward to seeing more.

    Keep it up,

    Brooke

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