"Hey! I haven't seen you in like a week! I missed you!" Samantha said, her face jumping with excitement.
"A week really isn't that long... but yeah I missed you too." Ariana mumbled
"Oh... um, well what store do you want to go to first?" Samantha asked, looking around at all the stores around her.
"I don't know. You pick." Ariana said, her tone soft
"Okay. How about Urban Outfitters?" Samantha added
"I guess. There clothes are kinda weird though. I don't know why anyone would wear them." Ariana said.
"I love their clothes... Whats wrong with you Ariana? All you have is insults for me. If you don't want to be here then leave. You aren't forced to be here." Samantha mentioned, choking in her tears.
"Wow, don't be such a baby. I'm leaving. I can't stand to be seen with someone as stupid as you." Ariana replied.
"Why did I ever trust you. I though we were friends?" Samantha cried
"You thought wrong." Ariana said as she stomped away
Hi Katie!
ReplyDeleteNice job! Your formatting looks good. This is kind of sad, I hate when friends get in fights. It makes me sad! I really like how detailed you made the two character's dialogue though. Good Job!
Sincerely,
Katherine Ann
Hey Katie!
ReplyDeleteThis dialogue is very well set up. I love the way you describe how each girl answers the questions. I reflect this dialogue on my other friends and myself. I hope you and your friends are getting along great. The punctuation looks great. Great job Katie!
From your classmate,
Brooke